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I really really love you I wish that one day you could love me as I love you although I know that this is not possible because it is only in my dreams

希望能够帮到您！

the college entrance examination is coming, if you are seeing/dating someone then don't break up, it could affect your grades if you are not seeing/dating anyone then don't confess your love because if you got rejected, it could affect your grades even more

Grow

old

with

you

陪你到老

I'll

make

you

smile

whenever

you're

sad

Carry

you

around

when

your

arthritis

is

bad

All

I

wanna

do

is

grow

old

with

you

I'll

get

you

medicine

when

you

tummy

aches

Build

you

a

fire

if

the

furnace

breaks

It

could

be

so

nice

growing

old

with

you

I'll

miss

you

kiss

you

Give

you

my

coat

when

you

are

cold

Need

you,

feel

you

Even

let

you

hold

the

remote

control

Let

me

do

the

dishes

in

our

kitchen

sink

Put

you

to

bed

when

you've

had

too

much

to

drink

I

could

be

the

man

who

grows

old

with

you

你伤心时，我逗你笑

脚痛时，我背着你跑

我只想，陪你到老

你胃痛，我给你拿药

火炉坏了，帮你重造

一定会很好，陪你到老

我要想你，吻你

冷了，把外套给你披

需要你，感觉你

选台器都交给你

我来洗碗，清厨房

喝醉了，我抱你上床

可以做到，陪你到老

我要陪你到老

你问的是情态动词的用法。

1 COULD 

 表示请求和允许。

　　-----Can I go now 我现在可以走了吗

　　----- Yes, you can / No, you can’t  你可以 你不行

　　此时可与may互换。在疑问句中还可用could,might代替，不是过去式，只是语气更委婉，不能用于肯定句和答语中。

　　---- Could I come to see you tomorrow 我可以明天去见你吗？

　　---- Yes, you can ( No, I’m afraid not ) 你可以 你不行

2 Shall

 shall, should

　　1) shall 用于第一人称，征求对方的意见。

　　What shall we do this evening 我们今天晚上需要做什么吗》

　　2) shall 用于第二、三人称，表示说话人给对方的命令、警告、允诺或威胁。

You shall fail if you don’t work hard(警告)  如果你不努力你会失败的。

3Would

1) 表示请求、建议等，would更委婉。

　　Will / Would you pass me the ball, please  拜托你把球传给我，好吗？

　　2) 表示意志、愿望和决心。

　　1 I will never do that again 我再也不会那么做了。

　　3) would表示过去反复发生的动作或某种倾向。would表示过去习惯时比used to正式，且没有“现已无此习惯”的含义。

　　1 During the vacation, he would visit me every other day

          在这个假期，他每隔一天就拜访我一次。

　　4) 表示估计和猜想。

　　It would be about ten o’clock when she left home

      当她离开家的时候应该在10点钟左右。

　

Most people need to hear those "three little words" I love you Once in a while, they hear them just in time

大多数人需要听到那“三个小字”——我爱你。有时他们就会在最需要的时候听到。

I met Connie the day she was admitted to the hospice ward, where I worked as a volunteer Her husband, Bill, stood nervously nearby as she was transferred from the gurney to the hospital bed Although Connie was in the final stages of her fight against cancer, she was alert and cheerful We got her settled in I finished marking her name on all the hospital supplies she would be using, then asked if she needed anything

我在康尼住进收容所病房的那天见到了她。我在那儿当义工。把她从轮床抬上病床时，她的丈夫比尔焦虑不安地站在旁边。虽然康尼处于和癌症搏斗的晚期，但她仍然神智清醒，精神愉快。我们把她安顿好。我在医院提供给她使用的所有用品上标上她的名字，然后问她是否需要什么。

"Oh, yes," she said, "would you please show me how to use the TV I enjoy the soaps so much and I don't want to get behind on what's happening" Connie was a romantic She loved soap operas, romance novels and movies with a good love story As we became acquainted, she confided how frustrating it was to be married 32 years to a man who often called her "a silly woman"

“啊，是的，”她说，“请告诉我怎么用电视好吗我非常喜欢肥皂剧，想随时跟上进展情况。”康尼是个浪漫的人。她酷爱肥皂剧、浪漫小说和讲述美好爱情故事的**。随着我们越来越熟，她向我吐露说，跟一个经常叫她“傻女人”的男人生活了32年有多么沮丧。

"Oh, I know Bill loves me," she said, "but he has never been one to say he loves me, or send cards to me" She sighed and looked out the window at the trees in the courtyard "I'd give anything if he'd say 'I love you,' but it's just not in his nature"

“唉，我知道比尔爱我，”她说道，“可是他从来不说他爱我，也不给我寄贺卡。”她叹了口气，朝窗外庭院里的树望去。“如果他说声‘我爱你’，我愿意付出一切，可这根本不是他的性格。”

Bill visited Connie every day In the beginning, he sat next to the bed while she watched the soaps Later, when she began sleeping more, he paced up and down the hallway outside her room Soon, when she no longer watched television and had fewer waking moments, I began spending more of my volunteer time with Bill

比尔每天都来探望康尼。一开始，康尼看肥皂剧，他就坐在床旁。后来，她睡的时候多了，比尔就在屋外走廊里踱来踱去。不久，康尼不再看电视了，醒的时候也少了，我开始花更多的义工时间和比尔在一起。

He talked about having worked as a carpenter and how he liked to go fishing He and Connie had no children, but they'd been enjoying retirement by traveling, until Connie got sick Bill could not express his feelings about the fact that his wife was dying

他谈到他一直是个木工，他多么喜欢钓鱼。他和康尼没有孩子，但他们四处旅游，享受着退休生活，直到康尼得病。对他妻子病危这一事实，比尔无法表达他的感受。

One day, over coffee in the cafeteria, I got him on the subject of women and how we need romance in our lives; how we love to get sentimental1 cards and love letters

一天，在自助餐厅喝咖啡时，我设法和比尔谈起女人这个话题，谈到生活中我们多么需要浪漫，多想收到充满柔情蜜意的卡片和情书。

"Do you tell Connie you love her" I asked (knowing his answer), and he looked at me as if I was crazy

“你跟康尼说你爱她吗”我明知故问。他瞧着我，就好像我有神经病。

"I don't have to," he said "She knows I do!"

“我没有必要说，”他说道。“她知道我爱她!”

"I'm sure she knows," I said, reaching over and touching his hands rough, carpenter's hands that were gripping the cup as if it were the only thing he had to hang onto "but she needs to hear it, Bill She needs to hear what she has meant to you all these years Please think about it"

“我肯定她知道，”我说。我伸出手，触摸着他那双木工粗糙的手。这双手紧握着杯子，似乎它是他需要依附的惟一东西——“可是她需要听到它，比尔。她需要听到所有这些年来她对你意味什么。请你考虑考虑。”

We walked back to Connie's room Bill disappeared inside, and I left to visit another patient Later, I saw Bill sitting by the bed He was holding Connie's hand as she slept The date was February 12

我们走回康尼的房间。比尔进了屋，我走开去看望另一个病人。后来，我看见比尔坐在床边。康尼入睡了，他握着她的一只手。那天是2月12日。

Two days later I walked down the hospice ward at noon There stood Bill, leaning up against the wall in the hallway, staring at the floor I already knew from the head nurse that Connie had died at 11 AM

两天后的中午时分，我顺着收容所病房过道向前走着。比尔站在那里，靠着墙，凝视着地面。护士长已经告诉我，康尼在上午11点故去了。

When Bill saw me, he allowed himself to come into my arms for a long time His face was wet with tears and he was trembling Finally, he leaned back against the wall and took a deep breath

比尔看见我后，让我拥抱了他许久。他满脸泪水，浑身颤抖。最后，他向后靠在墙上，深深地吸了一口气。

"I have to say something," he said "I have to say how good I feel about telling her" He stopped to blow his nose "I thought a lot about what you said, and this morning I told her how much I loved her and loved being married to her You shoulda2 seen her smile!"

“我有话非说不可，”他说道。“我得说，对她说出来，感觉真是好极了。”他停下来擤鼻子。“你说的话我想了很多;今天早上我对她说我多么爱她……我多么珍惜和她结为夫妻。你真该看看她的笑容!”

I went into the room to say my own goodbye to Connie There, on the bedside table, was a large Valentine card from Bill You know, the sentimental kind that says, "To my wonderful wife I love you"

我走进康尼的房间，亲自去和她告别 。我看见，床头桌上放着一张比尔给她的大大的情人节贺卡——就是那种充满柔情蜜意的贺卡，上面写着：“给我出色的妻子……我爱你。”

默默关注他数年，在某一天她变得孤单或者落魄时，你才出现并安慰她，但那时已时过境迁，不知表白还有没有意义。下面我为大家整理了表白暗号大全。

看不懂的一定是告白短句

1 And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music

那些听不见音乐的人认为那些跳舞的人疯了。

2 I do not know where to go,but I have been on the road

我不知道将去何方，但我已在路上。

3 但凡不能杀死你的，最终都会使你更强大。

That which does not kill us makes us stronger

4 其实人跟树是一样的，越是向往高处的阳光，它的根就越要伸向黑暗的地底。

But it is the same with man as with the tree The more he seeks to rise into the height and light, the more vigorously do his roots struggle earthward, downward, into the dark, the deep - into evil

5“Eyes are raining for her,heart is holding umbrella for her,this is love”

眼睛为她下着雨，心却为她打着伞，这就是爱情。

委婉的表白语句

1花自飘零水自流。一种相思，两处闲愁。此情无计可消除，才下眉头，却上心头。

2 茫茫人海中，相识了你，是一种缘份，只希望用我的真诚，换取你的真情。

3世有渊明，菊花无憾也;世有白石，梅花无憾也;世有嵇康，琴弦无憾也;世有余纯顺，穷山恶水无憾也;吾有汝，亦无憾也

4 当我把神灯擦三下后，灯神问我：想许什么愿望我便说：我想用我的一生照顾一个正在看短信的人，愿她永远幸福快乐，并在她不顺心时庇佑她!

5《诗经·唐风·有杕之杜》：

有杕之杜，生于道左。彼君子兮，噬肯适我。中心好之，曷饮食之。

有杕之杜，生于道周。彼君子兮，噬肯来游。中心好之，曷饮食之。

委婉看不懂的表白

1、睡前打电话。他：我睡不着。我：想什么呢他：因为你不是我的。我：那你现在可以安心睡了……

2、在一个星期五的早晨，刚睡醒，在床上发短信聊天，突然来一句“做我女朋友吧”!傻掉……这个时候脑袋里冒出来一句哪里看到的话：我牙还没有刷呢!然后就谈到现在，三年了~

3、他把自己灌醉，我把他拖上TAXI，问他家在哪他装醉不出声，结果只好拖到我家，把他扔床上。我在沙发上躺着看了一夜电视，到天亮跑进房一看，他还是昨晚那个姿势，估计真醉了。我决定不委屈自己，凭啥女生睡沙发啊，我爬上床趴在他身边的空地上准备补眠。可耳朵居然隔着床垫听到他打雷一样的心跳声，这小子居然装睡!

4、中学同学，他是班长。毕业吃散伙饭的时候他拿着话筒说了一堆客套的废话，然后左手顺手一拉扯住我，当着老师同学的面说“做我女朋友吧”，我下不来台，加上确实也不讨厌他，就糊里糊涂答应了。这厮过了好几天才跟我说，拉错人了，要拉的是另一个MM(我和他的共同好朋友)，不过会对我负责的。天地良心，当时我和他什么都没发生。现在结婚3个月了。

5、每年问几次：让我照顾你好么问到第5年，实在扛不住了，短信回之：好。他立刻昭告天下，通知了几乎所有老同学。结果我大半夜收到无数嘲笑短信：俩大龄青年玩初恋，还好意思拿出来炫!