"向情人表白,应该说哪几句英文最合适"?

From see you one eye, I shit love you
自从看到你的第一眼，我便爱上你。
Your eyes close,I die;your eyes open,I come back to live你的眼睛闭上，我就死了；你的眼睛打开，我又活过来；May be you do not remember me,no matterWhen you carefully look at me,you will one see clock
也许你不记得我，没有关系。当你仔细看着我，你就会一见钟情。
I will be with you forever!(这句就不用翻译了吧）